Every man loves Undine in this story, except for a nasty Abbot, and to be honest, I have no idea why. This story has plenty of potential, but the author is more intent on casting herself as the heroine in this story (Christine calls herself “CC” in this story) and the whole Mary Sue tale that is Goddess Of The Sea soon becomes tedious. Undine is supposed to love Andras, but why then does her heart goes pitter-patter for Dylan? Oh dear. Undine has to flee the amorous pursuit of her half-brother Sarpedon and she flees right to the arms of the prince, Andras. If you can sort out how a merman can be called Dylan when everyone else’s name is straight out of The Handbook of Overused Fantasy Names, let me know. The only person that knows of Undine being Christine is Undine’s mother, the goddess Gaea, and Undine’s friend and long-time secret admirer merman Dylan. When her plane crashes into the ocean – there’s a punchline here somewhere, I bet – she wakes up to find herself a mermaid named Undine in an alternate dimension and place where magic still exists. And she’s an Air Force Sergeant? And they sent her to the Middle-East to do that terrorist-asskicking thing? Is Ms Cast joking? I guess I can accept an Air Force Sergeant whining about her single state, but it is a really tough buy that this ditz is a military person.Īn old lady gives her some magic talisman and spell thingies and our heroine casts a goddess spell. Then Christine announces that she’s scared of flying. The first chapter alone sees her talking to her phone (her phone, not someone at the other line), and I’m supposed to find this adorable, I guess. I would expect someone to have graduated from military training will be able to get her act together, but Christine is a mess. Now, I wonder if I can get someone to make me a grilled fillet out of the supremely annoying mermaid heroine Christine “CC” Canady.Ĭhristine is an Air Force Sergeant.
Shame about the actual execution of the story. This take of The Little Mermaid is an interesting and imaginative romance story.
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Former independently-published author PC Cast’s latest offering Goddess of the Sea can’t be accused of being formulaic.
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